Friday, 12 February 2016

Narrative Writing

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The man is standing in the boat on the long, tall grass, in the middle of the forest. He would die because he has nothing to eat or some animal might come and bite him. He would save him self by finding how to get to the river and find some fish.


  1. Saveu I would like you to look at the success criteria for narrative writing. Please talk with your writing buddy and discuss how you can make your writing meeting the criteria. Mrs Tui


  2. Awesome narrative writing, Saveu I like the picture you used, maybe next time if you can write a bit more. Keep up the good work.